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Concetta Corleone Hitman

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So this is Concetta's 'Hitman' clothes I guess. Maybe you could call it her suite. Idk. I like this design though. I cheated and used the same pic as the first concetta pic but I changed the outfit. I'm so lazy =_=

No here's my little brain child's profile ;D (sorry it's so long)

Name: Concetta

Last name: Corleone

Age: 15

Birthday: December 13

Family: Vongola

Ring guardian: Moon Ring (Idk. Made that shit up ;D)

Weapon: Dual pistols but she can use other things depending on the situation.

Dying will flame: White

Box Animal: Ferret

Position: Hitman in training for the Vongola and is suppose to protect Tsuna when he needs it. So when he falls she's right there with a band-aid!

Crush: Tsuna (I know what you're thinking. WTF?!?! Out of all the guys? Really? XD)

Best friends: (regular) Reborn, Dino, and she hangs out with the rest of the gang a lot (from the Varia)Bel, Lussuria, and Mammon

Nickname: Sou-Chan or Sou (Sou written in Kanji and Concetta mean the same thing, conception. I had no idea Concetta meant that when I first named her >.< I thought it sounded pretty so I chose it and I'm not changing it now T^T) Con-Chan or Con

Personality: She is a loud and hyperactive person. She is kind and sweet in her own way but she has some issues sometimes. She can get a bit shy at times but that rarely ever happens but it's adorable when she does >w<

Hobbies: Uh killing people? She's a hitman (in training). That's what they do I guess. Hm...I guess she likes sleeping and just being random. That's always fun.

Dislikes: Being alone and those stupid telemarketers! So annoying! Oh and people who mess with the Vongola D=<

History: When she was little her parents died in a fight between two mafia families. (They weren't in the mafia though. just wanted to point that out ^^) She was at little people school (preschool) so she was all good and fine. She got home and bam! Dead parents in the yard (along with various other bodies) The 9th was there, seeing who all was dead from his family so they could hold a service or something and bury them and he was all, " Oh. uh little kid. I guess I should kinda take you in since we kinda filled your parents." That's how she became part of the Vongola Family! Yeah so Xanxus was there and they have a 9 year difference so when Concetta got there he was 14 and she was 5. He doesn't really hate her but he doesn't love her either. Blah blah blah time skip. So over a span of time she showed signs of being a kick ass hitman so they thought, why not? So they've been training her to be a hitman since then and she even learns some stuff from Reborn. The Vongola's Number One Hitman! yay! Then she goes over to Japan a little while after Reborn gets there cuz the 9th was all, Hey, you should go over there and learn some stuff from reborn and watch over tsuna. He's a bit of a dipshit. Then she was like, kay. and bam! She's in Japan like a few episodes before the Ring conflict and the Varia Arc~

Random facts: She is known to swear ;D Loves chocolate (who doesn't? Commies...That's who) Likes kicking babies (jk XD)
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Elis1412's avatar
I like her character well enough, but can I make a suggestion? Well, a few actually.
First, I'd like to start with her friends. Despite being in a baby's form Reborn is old, like REALLY old, to be truthful he might be willing to hold conversation with a 15-year-old but calling it a friendship is a bit excessive, don't you think? He's a pretty mature guy and considers even the more mature characters in Reborn, such as Dino and the other Arcobaleno pretty childish, so him being more than acquaintances with an ACTUAL child is hard to believe.
Also, her friends sort of conflict, Dino may be close to Reborn, but they're not friends, their relationship is of a sadistic tutor and his student. The Varia, are totally an entity of their own and really don't have friends outside Varia, so it's kind of hard to see them befriending someone who's close to both Dino and Reborn. 
Lastly, why not just give her an existing flame? I understand that perhaps you'd like her to be one of the Vongola or Varia, but you could just switch her with another character, like Lambo (who's too young to be doing that crap anyway) or make her the cloud guardian for the Varia. If you do want to make her a new flame you could make other characters to add to each group to balance it out I suppose which would be kinda fun...
Oh yeah, and the flames of the sky are based on weather (well besides sky) yeah? So moon isn't really WEATHER, basically look at it like this;
"Wow it's sunny outside!"
or 
"Wow it's cloudy outside!"
but
"Wow, it's moony outside!" doesn't work, in fact moony isn't even a word. But, y'know what does work?
"Wow, it's snowy outside!"
or
"Wow it's windy outside!"
But, yeah besides those few flaws (and her kinda skimpy backstory) she's a pretty good character. If you ever decide to make a fic with her, you should probably consider these things.